by gatlin | Nov 24, 2014 | Mail Bag
Hey JC, How does this sound for a kick ass opening sentence for my book: “The terrified onlookers huddled together beyond the outlying perimeter fence and looked up at the treacherous military drones pointed down at them, operated by a government that was now...
by gatlin | Jun 15, 2014 | Mystery Writing 101
There seems to be a lot of pressure to write a memorable, attention-grabbing, knock ’em dead first line. As authors, we’re supposed to understand its critical importance. Without an attention-grabbing, knock ‘em dead first line, readers may not move to the...